Recently, we have witnessed increased participation in the extreme sports world over. Proponents are debating over a positive and negative influence and impact of such sports. Many argue that it instills an adventurous mindset, however, others have opposite views stating that it comes with many detrimental effects. In this article, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of such type of sports.
To begin with, there are numerous benefits participating in extreme sports like river rafting, mountain biking, and hiking. First, by playing such sports, people get develop in their risk-taking ability. For instance, during my childhood days, I was afraid by the height, after taking part in such sports, it not only helped me develop personally but also, I was able to take more fearless risks in the professional life and career. Moreover, it keeps members physically and mentally fit.
On the other hand, there are negligible downsides of such extreme sports. They are exorbitantly expensive, hence, only wealthy and elite can enjoy such activities. Furthermore, if does not perform safely, it can be fatal and risky. For example, recently one person died due to malfunction of equipment while performing in Australia.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that although there are paramount advantages of extreme sports as at a time it can be exciting and thrilling, however, if not perform with utter care can be dangerous.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32327586207 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85715393821 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.917150831 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162370079697 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558728141961 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536455640854 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899490044687 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372210887542 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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