In the last decade, we have witnessed phenomenal development in the area of technological innovations. There have been holistic inventions in the field of information technology, medicine, and transportations. Proponents are debating over its advantages and disadvantages for individuals and to society as a whole. Many argue that it has paramount benefits which lead to convenient and comfortable lives to mankind, whereas, others have opposite view stating that it has severe detrimental effects on humans and societies. In this article, I will discuss both on advantage and disadvantages of technological marvelous innovation that is the computer system.
To begin with, there has been enormous positive aspects of using computer systems for both personal and professional use. Computers have broken the regional boundaries and make seamless convergence among individuals worldwide, due to which we can learn about a rich foreign culture. Moreover, we cannot imagine economic development without the help of computer systems, it has replaced mundane and repetitive task with the help of artificial intelligence and machine learning. Furthermore, its capability to do multitasking and performing complex calculations, managing huge inventories and processing a large volume of data is proven to be game-changing for businesses internationally. For instance, Majority of commercial activities are performed on the computer system from banking to education and from manufacturing to hospitality.
On the other hand, over usage and dependency on a computer has certain negative influences on people and society. For example, various research has proved that computer led automation makes human live sedentary, which makes them lazy and obese. Additionally, due to over computerization, many countries are facing a significant issue of employment.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that if used wisely computer systems can be boon for civilization, otherwise, it can turn in to a ban.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75503355705 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39796377714 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 379.143842365 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0664736573 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101210551478 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402659818381 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628370803574 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570017954438 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734863903138 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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