Pros and cons of extreme/adventurous sports
Undoubtedly, no one can abnegate that sports activities become important part of life. Right from childhood , everyone plays games/sports. When people get bored or fade up with routine work, they need some change or excitement to release the work stress. In earlier time, most of people played common games/sports like cricket, football and hockey. But now days, to play dangerous and adventurous sports become a new trend of sports. Everyone wants to do different in sports activities. However, one section of society believes that adventurous sports play a prime role in our life but other opposes this notation.
To initiate, there are multiple reason/factors that people play adventurous sports like ice hockey, car racing, skinning and so one. The first and foremost reason is that greed of name and fame. Many people names has been recorded in the Guinness world book of record for their courage actions in sports. The second reason is that it become a popular way to make money. It also help to increase self-confidence, physical stamina. It helps to enhance fear management skill. High caloric burn in these kind of sports. In my view, The major factor of that is risk taking attitude.
Diving deeper into the topic, on other hand, some people believe that these kind of sports are main cause of serious injuries and even death cases. These kinds of sports are very expensive and not available everywhere. Some people say that it is foolish idea to take unnecessary danger just for fun and enjoyment.
In conclusion, it is clear that adventurous sports are highly beneficial for health and wealth and also require special training skill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06617647059 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62344209825 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7452180857 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5263157895 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170090643398 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507283232758 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587696339491 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107611064299 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462378874623 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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