Climate change and about the role of government, corporate and individuals can play to improve it
Undoubtedly, no one can abnegate that climate is changing very fast. There are so many reasons and factors involved behind this situation. However, some analyst believe that global warming is the main cause of change in climate, but other opposes this notation. Global climate change phenomena is one of the most important issue in recent years. Individual, government and corporate companies are responsible for this .
To initiate, global warming is the main cause of climate change. Burning coal, oil, gas produces carbon dioxide and nitro oxide which are harmful for atmosphere. deforestation also a major cause of climate change. Large areas of forest have to be cut down for make residential areas. So increase in population is also a factor for climate change. Unwariness is also a cause for climate change. large quantities of fertilizers use to grow crops so therefore, more fertilizers means more nitro oxide in field , air and water.
Diving deeper into the topic, government, corporate companies and individual should take some serious steps to control or curb this situation. Government should arrange/organize awareness programs. A whole need to educate people about adverse effect and reasons behind climate change. government should make hard laws for companies. Companies should also look for other alternatives like hydro power, solar energy. They should use purifier inside the production plants. Individual should invest in energy efficient appliance. Motivation, awareness through social media, internet is also beneficial to aware people.
In conclusion, the sings are clear and alarming. We should adopt energy efficient and environment protection ideas and process. Make the best use of waste and recycle garbage and chemicals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Deforestation
...oxide which are harmful for atmosphere. deforestation also a major cause of climate change. L...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Large
...ss is also a cause for climate change. large quantities of fertilizers use to grow c...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hange. large quantities of fertilizers use to grow crops so therefore, more fertil...
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'so' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: so; therefore
...tities of fertilizers use to grow crops so therefore, more fertilizers means more nitro oxid...
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Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fertilizers'' or 'fertilizer's'?
Suggestion: fertilizers'; fertilizer's
...rs use to grow crops so therefore, more fertilizers means more nitro oxide in field , air a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...fect and reasons behind climate change. government should make hard laws for companies. Co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54850746269 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7804653665 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6551724138 182% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7723786435 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.652173913 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.652173913 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15825624227 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427848186937 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527097369926 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081305466414 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596521606629 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.39 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.73 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.