Racism is a long-lasting problem that bothers millions of people all over the world. Agree or Disagree?

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Racism is a long-lasting problem that bothers millions of people all over the world. Agree or Disagree?

The act of racism, by far, has been an alarming factor in the society as lot of people are affected due to this. Racism is being abusive, in person or by actions to the fellow human beings. The act of disturbing others through gestures, body languages and verbal exchanges contributes to racism. This passage will discuss the serious consequences of being racist to others.

All fellow beings at some point in time, tend to travel to other countries to work or earn a living. These immigrants face a lot of obstacles in form of racism in various places like neighbourhood, work and public places. These people who travel from other countries are being exploited mentally and physically by a weaker set of population in the form of disturbing them and abusing verbally. This weaker population who indulge in this antisocial activity are those who are deprived of their families and jobs, stray down in the streets with hunger and despair.

In contrast, for the reason that the so called racists, have lost important things in life, these unacceptable people start being a threat to others at public places. They have a thought that the immigrants or people from other countries have stolen all their jobs. People who are exploited by these racists are really in fear and pushed to uncertainties. If not at the ground level, in major offices, racism still exists when people start taunting others with their language and pronounciations. People had an oblique reason when asked about this.

In my opinion, racism needs to be get rid off and the government should make sure they take stern actions against people indulging in this anti-social activity. This spoils the country’s harmony and creates a bad impact among people who are likely to travel from other places. A good country is meant to be democratic and more secular and these kind of activities can really bring those factors down.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...t to be democratic and more secular and these kind of activities can really bring those fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, in contrast, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 31.9359605911 175% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61100435656 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.990177193 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 2.75862068966 435% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112712498731 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437774301811 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263629702758 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763090279325 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239240776725 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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