In recent years, obesity rates around the world have increased dramatically. Do you agree with the idea that parents who let their children become obese should be criminally charged and punished?
Good health plays an important role in our life, because it is right said that sound mind is in the sound body. Whereas In this era, the issue of obesity has become the topic of discussion, because obesity rate are increasing day by day around the world, So that some people think that parents who are responsible to become their kids obese, should be criminally charged and punished them. I am partially agree with this statement and discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays all children are fully independent and they are not dependent on their parents and parents do not live all day with them, they also go to the schools and outside of the homes, when they eat more oily food, due to which they become obese.
On the other hand, some people believe that some parents do not take proper care towards their offsprings, because they do busy in the own works, due to which their children become obese, so government should charge and punished them. Besides this, obesity is very harmful for the kids, because they have to face many diseases du to the obesity like heart and breating problems, so that parents should force their kids for physical exercises and games. After that, parents should deny their kids from watching television and eating oily and fatty food.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is parents and teachers should aware the children about the obesity and children should also use some precautions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, so, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81007751938 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23890476564 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.71428571429 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7955438522 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.888888889 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355143314928 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131176397166 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110699566156 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200516542644 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770598760258 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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