I evolutionary that because of benefits in hygiene system life expectancy in both genders has grown. I think, the most people will look at this as positive development, but I think , it has disadvantage. One of disadvantage is birth ratio higher than death so the population is increasing, whoever the people have need more material food to ratio to before so the government is force that supply it whit high expensive and other advantage, productivity decrease also countries vulnerable to attack other countries. The population aged are retired so the are consumer that for government very costly, but the medical care advance has a lot of advantage, for example :with decrease to cost treatment can money the result that it to spend for education system also low medical expense affect on psychological aspect. Overall, existence of a good health system can help to improve mental health in school, trails work, society, before to found health system to the may today, humans death by a little illness and more woman death during childbirth and various illness, rampant on the different area so the government try to improve themselves health system because it's very important to the countries decided to found the world health organization for avoid of rampant ill.
- As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you 55
- As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...his as positive development, but I think , it has disadvantage. One of disadvantag...
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Line 1, column 783, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ucation system also low medical expense affect on psychological aspect. Overall, existenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10096153846 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77960370279 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.5024630542 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.858750178 50.4703680194 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.2 104.977214359 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6 20.9669160288 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174038689963 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108037488273 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852608301246 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174038689963 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 12.6369458128 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.3980295567 177% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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