I totally agree that becuse of development in health and system care, life expactency for both genders has grown.
The researches show, most people agree develpment health system care. They think, development health system can their life increase and they expect development health system their illness treatment so they tell, this is a positive development, but they dont think disadvantage that.
I agree with them, but it has it's own specific problems, for example: the population increase is one of difficaultly becuse this population need supply food, system health, school, job. Population's retired is one of important problems becuse they convert consumer and they have expence for government. In the aged society decrease productivity also birth ratio higher than death, however we can used of their experince.
I oponion, existence a good health system can advantage for scoiety, for example: In good health system decrease expence, that we can spend in other organization, like : system school, jobs, make factory, help economy.
- As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you 55
- As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 31.9359605911 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 1207.87684729 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 242.827586207 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72019885051 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 379.143842365 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2836077715 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185850743853 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935527064402 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354576684024 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120108388897 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389107309434 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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