As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and / or examples from your own experience or observations.
Old age is an inevitable stage of every human's life. May it be men or women, each one of them goes thru old age, at approximately same time in their lifespan. In this last leg of their life, people need care and medical attention. In today's world, medical technology has progressed so well that it adds more years to old age person. This brings to focus an important scenario of increasing population of old age people. This scenario poses certain advantages and disadvantages with respect to an individual and society, as well.
Old age people need more care than young people. But, old age people do not contribute to the society and will not in future, too. So, caring for them is not going to benefit the society, directly. Young people work and perform various duties which effectively is targeted towards betterment and advancement of the society. Therefore, care that does not lead to any benefit is an disadvantage.
Every old age person was young and working earlier than today. And, every young person working today would get old later on in his life. Psychologically, every young person would like to be taken care of himself when in old age he or she would not be working. So, to keep the spirits of a young individual high towards working and later on living retired life, it is must that all old age people are taken care of, now and in future, too.
In conclusion, despite no direct advantage gained from an aging population, it is aesthetically important and fundamental that old aged people are taken good care of medically and otherwise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...Old age is an inevitable stage of every humans life. May it be men or women, each one ...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... contribute to the society and will not in future, too. So, caring for them is not going ...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...re that does not lead to any benefit is an disadvantage. Every old age person ...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d age people are taken care of, now and in future, too. In conclusion, despite no dir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77490774908 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6515579166 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546125461255 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.180014855 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229269338191 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893213885643 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440402558357 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149944536844 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561431750927 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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