Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about large malls replacing small shops. While it is possible to claim that large malls are better than small shops, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, I would like to state that small shops give more employment to locals than large malls. For example, all large malls have 1200 employees, whereas small shops have 9000 employees. The result is many more people are employed due to small shops than large malls.
In continuation to the above point, I would also like to state that large malls have few or no human touch towards its customers, whereas small shops remember and welcome its customers by face. For instance, no employee in large malls is going to recognize me, even if I revisit the place more than few times. But, workers in smalls shop not only recognize but also welcome its customers even if they had visited just once or twice in recent past.
Those who argue for large malls are better than small shops have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that large malls are more cost effective than small shops. However, in my opinion they need to collect more money from its customer to cover their cost of shop within the malls.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that small shops are better than large malls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that small shops are better than lar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67164179104 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16181033515 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8600284959 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314960625138 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132138797439 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613688349383 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190969912961 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460214074883 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 57.0 Out of 90
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