As a result of advances in medical care, life expectancy is increasing for both men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? what are the disadvantages of the ageing population for individuals and the society? Support your point of view with reasons / or examples from your own experiences and observations?
Advancements in medical technology has resulted an increase in life expectancy for both genders. While some people consider presence of aged person’s as a good omen, others maintain the availability of old age people as a burden on the society as well the individual. There exists both merits and demerits of ageing population, however, I am of the opinion that the former outdo the later.
Firstly, old age people have proved to be an asset to the society as well as to their families. Moreover, utilizing their experiences they can teach values and act as motivator for the societies. For instance, presence of grandparents at a home will enable the young parents to work freely without any worries related to the grooming and upbringing of their children which would be done by the grandparents in an immaculate manner.
Additionally, all household chores and matters can be better looked after by elderly in a befitting manner as the young people are unable to make out time to maintain equilibrium in family relationships. Not only the relationships and upbringing of children is one sore point but also advice in better financial management can also be sought from elderly.
To conclude, I opine that merits of presence of aged people in a society triumph over demerits as they prove to be beneficial for their families in all domains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an immaculate manner" with adverb for "immaculate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...which would be done by the grandparents in an immaculate manner. Additionally, all household chores...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03555555556 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9301801234 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595555555556 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2793118957 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.888888889 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195594475304 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919069081147 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094290859313 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121737860326 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882727688686 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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