To begin with, there are several reasons that I support newspapers should have replaced by the Internet. First and foremost is that news from all around the world are easy-access and reachable in convenient anywhere people would like to read the latest news. In addition, there is little room doubt that the internet is user-friendly as a result of no need to cut trees for producing papers.
Furthermore, needless to say, that it is impossible to publish all news in a small space of newspapers. Besides these, many thanks of modern technology such as the smartphone which provides people many kinds of social media to share the last news on it, so by the internet media can share their affairs for individuals globally so this item is impossible for a newspaper because newspaper just produced for local people. for example, a group of reputable social scientist, working in a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to find the relationship between those who read the news in a newspaper and on the internet. therefore, the result revealed that those who read in newspapers are three times less aware of the international affairs.
to recapitulate, I entirely believe that although there are several problems on reading news on the internet such as harmful radiation which produced by mobile phone and wireless modems, I totally prefer to surf on the network to gain the latest news. As every garden may have some weeds.
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on the network to gain the latest news. As every garden may have some weeds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02083333333 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114071951 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2540597276 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102255025269 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424019278109 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399441601228 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669690166455 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036792634417 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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