In this day and age school used to prepare students for university and teach skills to them for work. Although purpose of
Schools just considered as a way to university, but I disagree with this idea because there are technical schools with practical training to send students for labor-market too.
For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss advantages of this kind of schools.
To begin whit, there are various reason that I support this kind of technical and professional schools.
First and foremost, instantly after graduation, students could get a job, at least 4 years sooner than a graduated from university;
Also, in this period of time, they could become the master in their profession.
In my personal experience, when I started my first job as a building mapper, I was just 17 years old.
Secondly, to get an education degree, the student has to pass a term in real space of job related with their field of study andThey could gain very useful experiences in this term. While in the university, dedicated time for practical lessons is less than theoretical and academic lessons.
For example, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shown that achievement in job for those who studied in practical-schools is
Far than the educated people of the university.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons with advantages of preparation for work by schools.my personal sentiment is that by studying in practical-schools, people can save the further time of their life and learn arts and technics in young age to reach to a good job position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98665295018 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0802581433 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.3 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25579888026 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106105291113 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617778481596 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100226505773 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578390095672 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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