Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s actions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
In this days, this statement that parents should accept the responsibility for their children's action has become a controversial debate among people around the world. legally parents are facing the consequences of actions from their children. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this case.
Firstly, there are various reasons that parents should be legally responsible for the behavior of their children. One of them is the lack of law for judge the children before the legal age. For example, if a child in 8 years old does the shop-lifting, their parents should be sentenced due to lack of the law in this field.
In addition, Another reason that parents are responsible for the bad behavior of children is the way that they train the children and how their lessons learned to do the true behavior in the society to the children. For instance, a recent scientific research done by MTB University has shown that the kind of children's actions rooted in their taught of their families.
In conclusion, there are several reasons that parents should be responsible for the actions of their children because parents must legally accept the consequences of their children behave in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98529411765 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67028211513 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2878586455 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344340956854 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171992592418 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564122177438 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235502757205 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514111986635 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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