Should animals be kept in zoos or are they better in living in their natural habitat?
The importance of zoos which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others rejects of this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational.This essay will further elaborate my view for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most important one stems from fact of this trend is that zoos provides the employment opportunities for the people s. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that it is beneficial for the scientists research lab. Needless to say, that all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more myriad of reasons but one of the crucial impact is that zoos provide the information about different s animals. Moreover, the people come to zoo and also zoo change into tourist place. Furthermore, zoos develops the economy growth of government. Hence, apparent it is why many are in favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of Zoos are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07305936073 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77951322948 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8782745656 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749893366562 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312459984913 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300272083578 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493907004406 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274699654469 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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