Nowadays many countries have to decide to either invest an enormous amount of money to public transport or roads and how to reduce the number of vehicles in city centres. It can be agreed that without serious investigation in both at the same time will not give satisfying effects. In this essay, I will explain why it is necessary to build much more roads and improve transportation in major cities.
Passed several last years number of cars tremendously increased, which lead to overcrowding city centres and main roads. Moreover, nowadays more and more people have more than one car and live in suburbs, therefore they need somehow to get to the city centre. For example just after the handover the new bridge in Warsaw it becomes one of the most crowded ones by traffic jams. Further extension of basic roads arteries is essential for growing cities.
On the other hand, an increased number of the population requires also major improvements in public transportation. All infrastructure projects should combine the interchange hubs for rails and subways. Without those, the problem will just arise like in India where all roads are blocked by individuals riding on motorbikes and transportation is ineffective. Encouraging many people by well-organized infrastructure will unblock many jammed streets in cities.
In conclusion, there are many factors which affect decisions what is more important either new roads or improvement in public transport. In my opinion, both require to be undertaken at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23673469388 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94167657262 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3666880472 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267230612392 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832913162221 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944308066242 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160534566363 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556052181956 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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