should government build more roads to alloy more vehicle owner and reduce overcrowding in cities or improve the network of public transports?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that should government build more roads to allow more vehicle. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that should government should build more roads to allow more vehicle cannot contribute to developed more roads to control traffic system, but also lead to numerous other benefits of various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it come to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their choices of prosperity and excellence is considered.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden and horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of should government build more roads to allow more vehicle.
In view of my arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of should government build more roads to allow more vehicle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
..., not only can one benefit more when it come to being effective, but they can also e...
^^^^
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...build more roads to allow more vehicle.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96124031008 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7833559759 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2890139547 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273773946117 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113494548029 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143411612479 0.071462118173 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199855425964 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521341143665 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.