Smoking Causes Cancer. Cigarette companies want to reduce the age from which people can smoke to 12 years old. Governments believe that only adults should be allowed to smoke.
The astonishing aspect of the topic lies between the usages of cigarettes for under age kids whereas government permitting it only for adults. I consummately accord with the notion of government and will present few points to support this consent.
Firstly, the most prominent reason of smoking in early age will directly affect health of children. As children immune system is very stumpy and it may hurt them internally. Researchers have indicates the alarming causes of smoking, in early ages, can bring lungs cancer and its substantially intensifies day by day. It can also be taken into account that addiction of smoking can bring exponential harm to their lives.
Secondly, in order to comprehend the versatility of nonsmoking, as kids are immature, they are unware of consequences of smoking which are pretty pernicious. Students in all ages have a very limited pocket money and somehow they have to bargain with other healthy activity. Then, there are concerns about its impact over socially and economically. It will also affecting the companies who are campaigning for its early usage in terms of annual turnover. Government has to take some preemptive actions to restrict its usage. There by, it clearly validates the aforementioned reasons.
To conclude that, I would like to accentuate the fact that the government have to take one step further and plays a vital role by banning any company advertising for under aged children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...socially and economically. It will also affecting the companies who are campaigning for i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19658119658 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8352631656 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6113443149 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196501142647 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566011297474 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051633524257 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103241200507 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441017685516 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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