In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Any cuisine is part of individual life and every regime promises right to eat to everyone. Over eating or eating junk food is rely on individual to digest in form obesity or energy. Some people believe that they should stop eating fast food and government should levy a tax barrier on those fast food items to prevent obesity's cases and other believe imposing the taxes is not best solution. In this essay, I partially reckon the notion and will discuss both views and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, people believe that halting at eating fast food and imposing a heavy tax on these items resolve the problems of disorder and obesity. They believe that current rate of obesity and other diseases such as high blood pressure, sugar etc are raising in societies. They believe that government come forward and levy a higher tax slab on cold drinks, fast foods such noodles, Maggie etc. They also tend to believe these items may give a potential risk of critical diseases.
On contrary, people argue that imposing a heavy tax on these items will not solve this problems. There are other method such as campaign for awareness, nutrition guidelines and etc. People argue that consumption of these item should not be on daily basis which is harmful. People consider that government doesn't impose any taxes on these beverages, fast foods which could be financial load on them. Health issue may be happen with other edible products as well.
In recapitulate, there are strong facts discussed for this argument. I reckon partially and strongly decline the view of tax impose on public. I recommend regime should campaign the nutrition guide to be stick on every products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, i reckon, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92605633803 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3691374882 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3035386859 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4375 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236220053986 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767008665977 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714564121063 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142990207526 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494382062284 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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