In Some Countries, The Number of Shootings Massacres Increase Because Many People have Guns at Home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.
Guns are the methods to protect human beings in various conditions but these days almost everyone has the availability of gun in their house. This has generated a debate among intellectuals that shooting massacres is increasing these days as numbers of people are holding guns at home. In my opinion, this statement is true and numerous points will be discussed in this essay to support my view.
Undoubtedly, the violence has increased in the cities as numerous people are holding guns with them. This has observed that in various cases individuals use gun even in the small cases of arguments. Moreover, People have started to carry guns in their cars and in case of accidents quarrel lead people to use guns as this have noticed many accidents are caused due to this reason.
In addition to this, people have started considering guns as a status symbol and they use guns almost in every occasion. This has further made this situation worse. Furthermore, the laws to carry guns are not strict enough in number of countries, and this is promoting people to buy guns. People are passing guns to their kids as these are easily accessible, which has increased the chances of accidents significantly.
In the end, it can be concluded that appropriate use of guns can help to protect anyone’s life, but most of massacre is occurring these days is due to the easy access of guns to every individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: enough
..., the laws to carry guns are not strict enough in number of countries, and this is promoting peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8875 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68273479349 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1859315048 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317394379258 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134368468837 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807894885985 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191384312561 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722108106935 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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