Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium of spreading news and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
There is no doubt that everyone has an easy access to the TV and other technical equipments due to globalization and advancement in technology. Especially, TV has become an Integral part of everyone’s life. This is used as a medium of providing information and getting news around the globe. Some points will be discussed related to this essay and will help to shed light on this topic.
To begin with, due to modernization, TV has reached to every corner of the world and everyone has access to it. It is one of the main sources of entertainment and providing news to people. Firstly, it is one of the important aspects of relaxation while free time. There are numerous channels available containing content of laughter to movies. Moreover, various new channels provide information about thing happening around the globe, and then this leads for people to consider TV as a companion in their life.
Furthermore, as the world is getting advanced, everyone is getting busy in their life and no one has time left to sit with their family members and this time source like TV plays a crucial role in the life. After the busy day, device like TV provides all essential information and helps a person to get relaxed. Thus people usually consider this as a method of entertainment.
In conclusion, in my opinion, undoubtedly TV has gain a major role in everyone’s daily life and has become an intellectual part of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
There is no doubt that everyone has an easy access to the TV and other technical equipment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94538938296 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2722928827 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298124580543 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952706921136 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735290141195 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182133393008 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047088030134 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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