In some countries, the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening ? What measures can be taken to stop it ?
Everybody wish to live their life as they want to. Some people just go for it, while others are being influenced either by other people or engaged with electronic gadgets. Cities with wide range of facilities give chance for people to explore more. This in turn reduces the chances of getting connected with other people and nature which results in decreasing the quality of life. This essay briefly discuss about how quality of life has changed and how can that be stopped.
Firstly, larger cities provide more facilities like internet, transport that are highly benificial for our daily life. However technology has made many people addicted. It keeps technically connected but physically divided. So the chances for people to spend their quality time with their beloved ones are reduced. Additionally, children spend their time in playing games instead of having outdoor activities. This affectes them both physically and psychologically. Childhood is precious time where we tend to play games with our neighbours, make friends, have wider range of view on life,. Unfortunatly children are influenced by gadgets that has chances of grooming them as introvert and aggressive adults. Increase in transport facilities has both pros and cons. The major drawback is that the environment get polluted and city gets traffic. Over the period of time, people lose their patience and turn reserved. Hence people live in larger cities are less peaceful.
Life like a machine builds a narrow thought process in people. To avoid this we can chose to spend our time with friends and family atlease once in a week. Staying connected with people gives us chance to explore more, makes our life stressless and brings happiness. Spending time with infants makes us relaxed. Some people can also opt to spend time with nature, away from city visiting a new location and staying connected with nature will be a refreshment. There are also other things to do like painting, helping the needy and even having a deep conversation with elderly people. The can share their own experience where we can learn about the importance of life.
To put it in a nutshell, we all are keen in developing cities with all latest technologies and making our dailiy activites easier. But unless we realise that we are losing our quality of life on the other side the inner peace cannot be saved.One should realise their importance of life and live it with happiness and die peacefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1207.87684729 170% => OK
No of words: 406.0 242.827586207 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05418719212 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 3.92707691288 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54890766451 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 139.433497537 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 379.143842365 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 12.6551724138 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0591243586 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9230769231 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 6.9802955665 272% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162960222394 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480461891646 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441143444229 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111939663649 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031452936005 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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