In some countries young people are encouraged to work or to travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement a dialogue on young people are willing to take a year gap between high school and university studies
can lead to though provoking discussion. my view is that, irrespective of numerouse aurgument that exists on both the sides, by leaving a year gap they get
wasted of one year studies. through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the aurgument.
Firstly, there are disadvantages to be considered, young teenagers after compeleting their high school they work for a year and then they start the university studies
this makes the young people seak into earning money and they mind will be fluctuated by not admitting them in there higher studies. people also loose there hope in
studeis after getting paid and they are not considering the further studies which helps them to earn more.
Young teenagers by travelling they be independent and they try to observ the different culters. people they start westernise themselves in different countries
and they are grown up with many streuglles and they get experianced by many failiures. in addition they desire what they need and theya are not spoon feeded
by their family consequently people needed a gap to make an idea for higher studies which can helps out in their future
To conclude with, there is a potential evidence that i have provided and theya are considered in both ways, they need a year of gap to make a plan for themselves so they can have a
choice of what they wanted in there future. furthermore, there a re some disadvantages to be considered people when they start to earn money they loose hope in futher studies which is
more essential in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89597315436 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6366551467 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3035108575 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.111111111 104.977214359 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.9669160288 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225200314568 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105802048869 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767001944133 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948477500075 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862188808486 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 63.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 57.5 Out of 90
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