some organisations integrate employees in decision making process for their goods and services. Discuss ate advantages and disadvantages of this.

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some organisations integrate employees in decision making process for their goods and services. Discuss ate advantages and disadvantages of this.

there are few organisations are debate on employee's are involvement in the decision making process for their goods. it have both advantages and disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will discuss both point of views.
To begin with, there are myriad advantages of involvement of the employee's in decision making process. The first and formost employee's have a practical experience and they are also know how a industry become higher. Moreover, in this way the understanding between employee to employee become better and they work hapily. So needless to say, integrating of employee's in decision making process is goods for industry.In this way the bonding between employee to employee become good and employee's also become responsible and always give their good and organisation become will go on a peak point.
On the other hand, every coin have a two side. some time it is not good the involvement of the employee's because some employee,s not have a good expeience and their decisions are not good for the organisations and due to their decision organisation will get various kinds of disadvantages.
To conclude, every step can be take after good decision never give any kind of disadvantages. In my opinion, every oganisations involve employee's in decision making process but organisation will select only experience employee's as compare to fresher.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25688073394 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03687740257 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0267089793 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468006567265 0.242375264174 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173634406018 0.0925447433944 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136689555274 0.071462118173 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290408382552 0.151781067708 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053356859652 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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