Do you think formal written assessments in today's world to assess students’ performance is effective or not? Discuss your viewpoint on this and support your answer with examples.
These days, their is on going debate between people that the formal written assessments is effective for the students performance or it is not. In my opinion, written assessments can not be effective for the student performance. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my point of views.
To begin with, now a days people are living in the technology world and due to this practical knowledge is more effective as compare to the written asseements. practical work give different kind of knowledge into every individuals. Moreover, practical knowledge have different kind of benifits to every people. In the present world it is very easy to get a good job with the help of practical knowledge.
In addition, an individual never forget practical knowledge through out their life and a written work. practical work do not give any kind of pressure and stress on the students. Everyone do practical with a enjoyement. written work is same like a burden and it is not easy to remember. but practical work easy to remember.
To conclude needless to say. in the present era the written assessments is effective but the practicle knowledge give more knowlegdge to every one as compare to written assessments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00995024876 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91327413047 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1896651351 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9285714286 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197251867494 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693951920021 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698688347051 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127875779144 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675263309599 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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