In some parts of the world it's becoming increasingly popular to try find out the history of their own family. Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
It is irrefutable to say our history is rich as shown in the historical development of monuments, pyramids, Vedas and other mythological books. Some people consider preserving and studying about our history might open new ideas of our ancestors, whereas other do not agree to this notion and feel it as mere waste of time. This essay will discuss positive aspect of knowing family history and derive to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, history is the part of what we are today our physical, psychological, and biological aspects that is linked to our forefathers. This means that the way we think or behave have something to do with predecessor; furthermore, it gives self satisfaction and inner peace to individual to be aware of the fact from where they truly belong and it binds the family together. Moreover, knowing about family health history helps in detecting myriad diseases as well as treating them before it is too late.
Moreover, not only to us but it also seems to be an obligation for researchers to learn about an influential ancestral history on the fields of medicine and engineering. Monuments , pyramids, and wonders of world still questions people on how far they are able to decode those advancements of past. For instance the pyramid of Egypt, researchers still are not able to figure out about those development and was it possible for the people of that period to build such a massive structure without support weight lifting vehicles.
To recapitulate, family history opens many opportunity to know about lifestyle and struggle in the past and their ways of surviving thus giving pride to know about ancestors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02919708029 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8327342747 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6124981226 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117957184419 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450864157282 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0149828907763 0.071462118173 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659934330859 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220683269209 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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