Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
The issue of laws, Which has always debatable, but has now only become more controversial, Laws play a vital role in our society and everyone’s life by building personality. Laws have a very important role play in human’s life. Laws is very important part in every countries. The essay will explore how it can be overcome in the upcoming paragraph before a particular conclusion.
To begin with, Laws play a very crucial role in over society. Law is very important in human life. For instance, a bike driver drive a without helmet law can fine the person because they have drive without helmet. Laws protect their person in every accidents.
To the other hand, Some people are not like a laws role because people are understand laws have time wasted. For instance, Some laws are bad affect in people laws such as traffic light jump Pay fine because some people are not pay traffic fine because they have enough money . laws play some negative affect who is people are not them.
To sum up, as aforementioned, I think laws play a very crucial role in everyone’s life by building personality and laws is very important in our society because laws help in people any ways. Laws protect their people and laws have reduce the shoplifting. Laws is very important part everyone’s life .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ant role play in human's life. Laws is very important part in every countrie...
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...e how it can be overcome in the upcoming paragraph before a particular conclusion...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
... other hand, Some people are not like a laws role because people are understand laws...
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...ffic fine because they have enough money . laws play some negative affect who is ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Laws
...c fine because they have enough money . laws play some negative affect who is peopl...
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...cause they have enough money . laws play some negative affect who is people are n...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...Laws protect their people and laws have reduce the shoplifting. Laws is very important...
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...very important part everyone's life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87837837838 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7606436821 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8278153985 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3571428571 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193331518672 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089227380354 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570129925324 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129577731158 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630899286909 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.32886699507 78% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.