Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise, they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement, a dialogue on childrens educational importance can lead to though provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of numerous ideas exist on either sides of the argument, children should give importance in studies but they should also know that extra caricular activities and sports makes them more confident. Through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the argument.
There are many advantages by involving sports and music activities in their daily lives. Sports gives them decipline and in encourages them to include in social awareness and gain knowledge. People shold know that education is not only the knowledge provider, as we know there are many sports men and music composers who is week in thier education and concentrated on sports and music for example. famous cricket player Sachin Tendulkar and famous music composer A.R.Rahuman who won oscar award.
In addition, educational part will also improve them in many technology variations and they can gain knowledge in the upcoming featur of Robotics. Education will help them to seek in searching a job related to the concern department. Furthermore we should know that there more euntreprenoures are developed by educaiton system for example: Ratan Tata.
To conclude with, Hence i have provided a potential evidence through this essay. As we find mmore advantages in both the sides and they are not complete waste of time. fianly we should know that in what way we are intrested in ourlife so we can make pathway through it to get a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13432835821 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77663091099 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3909474219 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106529329642 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385482383089 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362505640659 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061597804996 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00764802667247 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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