Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth. Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
These days, ongoing debate of exploring the universal between people is a hot topic. Although it may increase the knowledge which can be beneficial for future of mankind, millions of population are suffering from the drastic ratio of poverty which needs proper Initiatives to get fruitful results. I strongly believe with the notion that more efforts should put toward the availability of food and health for mankind.
There are a plethora of reasons on the favor for taking actions to overcome poverty in which the most preponderant one is that huge amount of people are dying because of contagious diseases. Moreover, newborn babies are catching in life threating illnesses. For instance, one latest study published in the New York Times about the increased death toll percentage in infants during this decade comparatively previous one. So, the essential requirement is to take significant measurements to fix the situation.
Another pivotal perspective of this argument is that food is the primary need to survive in the world and a large number of people are starving for it. Furthermore, in under-developed countries literacy rate is still so low. Such as, a recent research has revealed the ratio of illiterate is still one third in the world. Consequently, instead of spending money on space exploration, need to deliver proper nutritious food to the world.
Lastly, money should spend for researchers and experiments in medical science as well as to raise literacy level. Therefore, I consummately agree in an accord for spending money to discover medicines to serve mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rimary need to survive in the world and a large number of people are starving for it. Furthermore...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...literacy rate is still so low. Such as, a recent research has revealed the ratio of illiterate is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, third, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92878458675 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5349278262 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992976135109 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319776930954 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338652953715 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541563026633 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277088859747 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.