Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
There is no doubt due to globalization and modernization technology has reached new heights and human has got the power to reach the outer space, that's why there is an ongoing debate among the intellectuals whether the money should be spent on these programs or the basic problems should be solved. In my opinion, exploring outer space can be beneficial and can have negative effects as well. This essay will discuss some of the points related to this topic and will help to shed the light on the matter.
Undoubtedly, the space program needs a huge sum of money to be invested and carrying the different operations by various organizations spends billion dollars every year. The world is going through a lot of crisis from poverty and infiltration so innumerable intellectuals debate that government should concentrate on resolving these issues instead of spending this huge amount of money on exploring space.
Instead of this, moving outer space has positive aspects too, as global warming and pollution is one of the big issues these days in front of humanity and exploring outer space will provide an opportunity to search of the same habitat condition for human survival. Moreover, this is playing a crucial role in the search for the cure for some of the diseases, which are one of the biggest problems of human beings.
In the end, it can easily be asserted from the essay that moving space and spending money on the space industry can have both positive and negative outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94047619048 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63497740903 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7894205165 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.625 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.9669160288 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248074993106 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10891228712 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462601893991 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149425937645 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366257978046 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.