Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.
There is no denying the fact that laws play a great role change human behavior. While some individuals believe that human behavior can be changed by laws, others argue that law have a little impact on human behavior. In my idea, I think we need a law to follow. This essay will elaborate both the arguments and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, it is true that people's behaviors can be changed by laws and it can be caused a noticeable effect on human behavior. Few conspicuous approach not only the law can be altered human's behavior, but also it can be changed human's future and life. For example, according to a recent research regarding law and behavior, it can be seen that there are a lower amount of crimes after strict laws. Hence, laws are more important for good future.
On the other hand, other people argue that law can have a little impact on person's behavior. But, according to my idea if we have not a strong law or judgment for offenses and crimes this world become a very dangerous place very soon. For example, when considering animal world they are fighting and killing each other. Therefore, without law, we cannot do live peacefully and without fear.
In conclusion, I think the law is an essential thing to carry life today and tomorrow. Therefore, I suggest to everyone to agree and follow the law and we should honor to the law in every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
..., it can be seen that there are a lower amount of crimes after strict laws. Hence, law...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ue that law can have a little impact on persons behavior. But, according to my idea if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59362549801 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42679523032 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3589561144 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3571428571 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480606528602 0.242375264174 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170905136698 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179544571065 0.071462118173 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275476714137 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143026926742 0.0609392437508 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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