Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
In the mordern era where everyone is seeking best lifestyle shopping mall and brand become in trend and trademark of being rich for purchage, this topic became a heated debate where some communities advocate shopping mall are impacting local shops in negative manner, other commodities disregards this phenomenon. In this eaasy we will analissis all the prominent point regarding eassy.
Firstly, shopping mall are first choise of middle class people for purchage fashinoable cloth and branded thing arround the globe, which give them level of global standred of leving. Shopping complex are providing best product with multiple discounts and benifits which attract customer which is not possible to get from local shops as their scope of products are limited.Going further you would not enjoy things in local shopping but in mall you will have maye option like Movies and different outlet which give happyfeeling felling and expend you choice.
However, Some people apart from adolecents they presume mall are tacking money on higher cost which is right and impacting local shops as coustomer footfall reduce in local markets, other hand i would provide significant reason of this impact is people are not buying country made product like khakhi and other handloom, our prime minister has feel this impact and introduce Khakhi promotion events all over the nation. This big step is proof of impact of local shops or local good which we produce.
To conclude, based on the admirable points and analisis with acqute froof i would say shopping malls are impacting our local market, but in our country there are most of the people are laying below middle class who still prefer local shop for their availability and Mall willimpaact a bit only on our local marcket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14583333333 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38225823978 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.5024630542 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.522041304 50.4703680194 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.714285714 104.977214359 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.1428571429 20.9669160288 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387039669381 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191604979905 0.0925447433944 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861775639964 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248662049918 0.151781067708 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269583827869 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 12.6369458128 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.3980295567 177% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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