It is important for children to take extra classes or play after school? Discuss both and give your opinions.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is collosal upsurge in attending extra classes after school.There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life.However,I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance The most preponderant one is that paying extra for tuitions can not only contribute to wastage of time,but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers,not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective,but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives ,with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needlessto say,all theese merits stand one in good stead,as far as augmenting their chances of prosperityan and excellence is concerned.
There are,However,some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of going for extra classes after school.The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend,people have not only realised its gravity,but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions whenit comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle.Besides,its impact on coaching classes is far-reaching indeed.Hence,it is apparent why many are against to go for extra classes after school.
In view of arguments outlined above,one can conclude that despite some drawbacks,the benefits of pay for tuition are indeed to great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51379942362 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.5024630542 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.3428528 50.4703680194 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.0 104.977214359 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 20.9669160288 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148529122795 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849014915273 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633613244529 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849014915273 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633613244529 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 12.6369458128 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 53.1260098522 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.9458128079 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.94827586207 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.3980295567 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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