Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree/disagree?
These days, There is a controversial debate among people about the impact of laws on human behavior. There are a great number of people who interpret the impact of this regulations as thoroughly constructive, While others hold an opponent 's view. I am inclined to believe that obey a law make communities safer so it is beneficial and should be promoted
There are several underlying reasons why impose a law in a society is advantageous.First of all, it is argued that laws play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that Such regulations could foster a great sense of humanity and altruism among people, therefore, they would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so individual 's enthusiasm and determination will be amplified towards many daunting tasks. The laws against the drug, for example, this is an upward step that people are not at liberty to commit a crime and regulations governing drug usage.
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by the government to stimulate individuals to obey the laws because improvement on human's behavior has gained social endorsements as a means to eliminate the crimes. This is to say that these regulations prohibit offensive activities. which would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem in people so that they are more likely to perform up to expectations in society. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that laws could serve as a remedy for the origin of crimes.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that continual regulations enhance the efficiency and effectiveness of individuals’ evaluation and increases the youngster’s confidence. It is expected that government take cognizance of these facts and introducing new planning regulations.
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| 2017-06-04 | baharferdosi | 85 | view |
| 2018-07-30 | Hundal | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33245988556 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.704994149 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.090909091 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178429157624 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643262678705 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682050441299 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103607244567 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069659666733 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.