Some people believe law changes human behaviour. Do you agree/disagree?
In this day and age, influence of the law on human behavior has become ongoing debate among people all around the world. Although law is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people hold and opponent's view. I am inclined to highly believe that law has a huge impact on human behavior as they could prevent criminals to put the societies in jeopardy. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss both sides.
To begin with, there are several reason why I support that law could change people's behaviour. First and foremost is that, law can force people to obey social role in all places. So gradually people try to coordinate themselves by other to do appropriate behaviour. for exampel, a group of researcher at Harvard University undertook a study in some contries which have more strich law for their citizen. The result revealed that those how were faced strich law three times more likely to commit a crime, and twice as likely to live in thise countries. The more strict law, the less commited crime we will faced. Thus, law play a key factor to change individual behaviour.
However, there is no doubt that law can control people in all places for example, in houses. That is to say, goverments and police are not able to monitor and privent commit a crime. In addition the behaviouer of people based on many factors such as, the places they were grow, the society and their countries. So we can see many people as soon as releses under law control they start to do unsocial manner. Hence, the law individually can not shape the poeple charatchters.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my own sentiment is that law paly a pivotal role on human behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76298701299 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52747384779 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1316496087 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309180826738 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939947462998 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613136604714 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163006608248 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659675042119 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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