Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
this essay will explain the importance of culture in the history of a country and society. globalization is a way to connect the people from one part of the world to other through internet or other online sources. people are more busy in their screens and they have no time for their relatives and even to take participate in their cultural heritage or activities related to it.
culture is as important as blood moving in the veins of a person, so, it is necessary to clean and preserve your culture. A nation is symbolized by the culture and heritage of its people that is why it is believed that one should preserve his culture. The importance of preserving cultural heritage in this age of globalization is very important because once it would be forgotten it will vanish from the sight forever.
government should take positive steps to educate the people about the importance of culture in their life. this will help them to transfer their culture, ethics and traditions to upcoming or next generation.
To conclude, The government of Austrailia is taking initiative to educate its people against the negative impacts of not preserving culture and its parts. people are encouraged to take part in cultural activities and programmes that will surely lead to a successful, prosper, and a happy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92760180995 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77497703284 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511312217195 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3779431791 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.9 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 7.25397266985 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825339906955 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392328689391 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203177405865 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055667999016 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00870936772771 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.