There are many arguments for and against the law effects on human behaviour. One argument is that the law can make an impact on human behaviour. However, the most people believe that human behaviour cannot be changed by regulations. This essay will discuss both points of views and shows why laws can have some effects on human behaviour.
To begin with, the law has a power to control the behaviour of society, mainly the unacceptable behaviour that disturb the peace and stability of society. Generally, these behaviour is controlled through the legal punishments. For example, some countries have the death penalty for the life-threatening activities. Therefore this inappropriate human behaviour is possible to be controlled by the law.
On the other hand, although the law can control the behaviour, it may not change the manner. Moreover, the law may restrain some improper personal actions by its law enforcement, but might not change personal mindsets and thoughts. For instance, the stealing is an illegal activity and it is judged by the law, however, the law only can control the stealing activity, but it cannot change the dishonest mind. Furthermore, the law has only the right to limit the deceitful actions and it may not have the power to change the behaviour that causing these actions.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the law effects on behaviour in some ways. In my opinion, the law can control the inappropriate manners but it cannot change them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this behaviour' or 'these behaviours'?
Suggestion: this behaviour; these behaviours
...ce and stability of society. Generally, these behaviour is controlled through the legal punishm...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ty for the life-threatening activities. Therefore this inappropriate human behaviour is p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12809917355 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81216791253 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2625665908 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2581111867 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108029773215 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516564877059 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172638683135 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496156592058 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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