Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.

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Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.

Submitted by ariufa on Mon, 07/03/2017 - 07:26

Marrying in younger age has become increasingly common in recent years. Although the many of them get married while studying and establish their careers successfully, there are numerous difficulties associated with their marriage. This essay will discuss the issues that related to marriage while in school.

The students who got married while they are studying, are challenging than other students those who aren't married. Married life demands couples to spend some time to their relationship, however, college students are required to allocate enough time to study. For example, if students cannot devote enough time to their learning activities, their grades may drop or even fail their exams. Being a married college student is more difficult than unmarried colleagues.

Being a husband and a wife while studying is problematic because the marriage makes mental pressure on them especially when young people are financially dependent on their parents. The financial dependency creates a number of problems for married students such as tuition fee or living expenses. For instance, living as married couple itself demands financial resources at least to survive. However, college students often unable to earn adequate amount of income. Thus, financial pressure leads them troublesome and mental hardship on their relationship.

In conclusion, this essay discussed how marriage life could make an impact on students’ academic abilities and their mental health. In my opinion, get married before finishing college has several disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...allenging than other students those who arent married. Married life demands couples t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71982758621 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78086064724 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0180774271 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184217721355 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652610658406 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655352016009 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118904221545 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350155554071 0.0609392437508 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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