One of the most notable trends in today’s world is an enormous upsurge in the thinking of some people, as they think that laws change human behavior. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should not be under consideration. In this essay, I will present an overview of the merits of this change in the behavior or benefits to following the laws and change in behavior.
There are plenty of arguments in favor of my stance. The most significant one is that it helps to slow down the crime rate in a country or city. Not only this change in the behavior controls the crime rate, but this variation in behavior also helps in the development of a nation. Needless to speak, all these merits have a far-reaching impact on the people's thinking and nation's build.
In my opinion, another focal aspect of this argument is that people regularly concentrate on their work rather than looking for the shortcuts. Besides when the crime rate is quite low then only people support their government and its rules in a precise manner to help the government in the advancement of the country. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that according to the laws people change their thinking and work accordingly. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both change in the thought and control on crime rate apparently can be seen. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor that laws change human behavior.
Aforesaid in the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the change in behavior according to laws are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a precise manner" with adverb for "precise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... support their government and its rules in a precise manner to help the government in the advanceme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, besides, but, hence, if, look, so, then, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76231524043 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503401360544 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1372644808 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240616406209 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837445599641 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830109662407 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149628978424 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435523811199 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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