These days ,there is an ongoing debate among people that whether laws change the human behavior or not. Some people argue that it act as a deterrent from indulging the people in crime while others have a different point of view. This essay will discuss that why laws are essential important for proper functioning of society.
To commence with , it is well known fact that people live in society which have all types of people.Hence, it becomes imperative to have hard and stern laws in order to protect the good people from criminals.To instance, in Arab country, there is zero percent crime rate due to strict laws.Therefore, it can be taken in account that laws change the Behavior of people.
Furthermore, there are numerous reliable grounds to support the belief that for people laws act as a deterrent for not indulging in wrong activities.As a tangible example, a scientific research taken by prestigious university asserted that people behavior depends on the laws for a particular area.Hence , it is clear that laws are much required for maintaining peace and harmony of the society.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that laws prevents the people from commiting the crimes.Therefore I would strongly recommed that strict laws are necessary for proper functioning of the society where the crime rates are increasing day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14090909091 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87641800462 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.366211834 50.4703680194 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.5 104.977214359 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 20.9669160288 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269888407755 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137919390851 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657794135091 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163140158699 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594486840032 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 12.6369458128 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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