These days, there is ongoing debate going on that television is a vital medium to spread news while for others it’s just a companion to them. It is irrefutable fact that in tech-savvy era it is one of the most important invention and discovery. It is great source of spreading news and awareness among people. This essay will explain that it is most important source of medium in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, it can seen that TV has now become the part of everyone life such that our day start and end with this. It can be argued that it has myriad programme and shows which increases awareness among people. For instance, there are bunch of news channels and many knowledge shows which gives us insight about the world. Therefore, it can be argued that It is an essential medium to amplify awareness between people.
Moreover, It is very convenient that people can watch all information while sitting at home. However, some people have a point that it is more like a companion or partner for alone people as once can get entertainment from it .but this point does seem right to deeper extent as it is only a source of news and awareness but not like a companion. Hence, TV is imperative source of spreading awareness in the world.
In a nutshell , this essay argued about both arguments and it is evident that TV is just a medium for entertainment more than just a companion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68825910931 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5959601008 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534412955466 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1297436335 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232220279781 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777294935522 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562047761921 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135895598278 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024148697204 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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