Some people believe one can be brilliant without leaving their local areas. To what extent do you think travel should be a component to improve education quality?
The important effect of some people can be brilliant without leaving their local areas was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of some people can be brilliant by living one particular place has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people become more brilliant who live in a same place in a long term on recent year. It can be agreed that people can be more intelligent and brilliant without leaving local area which helps in personal and professional growth.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people become briliant who live local area but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that people can easily understand and get knowledge about the polticiles and social and cultural knowledge. As an illustration, people can be more intelligent who live in local area can grow their social life styel in society. In addition, a current research shows in America shows David Jones of polticians he developed his polticial carrer in his local area in ciago and get sucessful. Thus, it plays vital roles in people life.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that people who live in local area can be independent and get sucess in life. For instance, people who live in long time in local area can build and develop a new technology in society. Thus, it is very important.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of people can be brilliant who live in local area is prominent, although the way the way of people who live in local area is not sucessful should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83754512635 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61160334871 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5444001796 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316170293485 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146183341195 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10409660522 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224159562855 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884418370096 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.