Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work while others believe it depends on the social circumstances you were born into. Discuss both these points of view and give your opinion.
Success is a really hard thing to reach for many people. There are several ways to be successful. Two of them are common beliefs. The first one is your application, how hard you work. And the second one is your socio- economic and cultural situations and that depends on where you were born into. Naturally where you were born is a parameter to be successful, but I believe that your effort and motivation to be successful is more significant.
Mostly when people try enough to achieve the goal, they become successful. For many researchers, productive, organized and continuous work is essential for success. We can see various examples around the world and simply around us. These people show us how we should manage our time and effort to reach our targets.
Of course socio-economic situations can influence goals in your life. But it is not how it usually works. For example, many people who were born into a not so rich life in every way can make a difference in their life to the world in a good way. After all, with enough motivation, everything is possible.
Being successful takes a lot of work and determination. However good socio-economic standards can make it easier, it is nothing without effort and motivation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, after all, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82644905622 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4514573674 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1875 104.977214359 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228923863352 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638879828544 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681315653119 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121246678989 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083638937316 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, after all, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82644905622 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4514573674 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1875 104.977214359 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228923863352 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638879828544 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681315653119 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121246678989 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083638937316 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.