Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Many people consider that home schooling is a better option for children nowadays; however, some people think that it is beneficial for kids to learn at an institution along with other students.
In my opinion, it is always better to study in a school, as it gives exposure and opportunities to learn from others. On the other hand, teaching at home could be beneficial for the better upbringing of a child.
Studying at a school gives children various opportunities to learn sports, arts, language and culture. This cannot be achieved at home. These institutes not only impart knowledge, but also help children in developing social behavior, which is extremely important for the society. Schools give children an atmosphere of healthy competition and let them identify their own flaws, which make them more responsible. For example, one of my friend’s daughter could not attend elementary school because of her bad health. This had a negative effect on her social and communication skills.
On the other hand, there are a few advantages to teaching children at home, as the education provided to the children is controlled and can be monitored. It is a known fact that along with all the good habits, children learn a lot of bad habits from school, while interacting with other students. This can be avoided when children are taught at home.
To conclude, even though teaching at home has its perks, schooling at an institute is always a better option because of the fact that a child requires development in various areas and regular schooling provides that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80108812331 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6183071403 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45399989629 0.242375264174 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154033583299 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973154880088 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254336069963 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690862513297 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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