Some people believe that TV is a useful invention. To what extent you agree with the statement. Give your opinion and explain with the observations and examples from your personal experience.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the tv as a useful device for people can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I have mixed thoughts to whether or not tv is a useful invention.
there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, several people believe that tv is beneficial to their daily routine, and it provides a lot of instant information and news which affect their activities. it is important to notice that if there is a sudden weather change which is not expected in the normal day, many people tend to follow the weather forecast programs to keep them safe form such changes. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that tv, with its live programs, provides extremely important information to people who depend on its specific weather programs.
Another pivotal role of the arguments is that the invention of the tv plays a significant role in family entertainment, and it helps them in several educational activities. When parents want to educate their children for better development, there are plenty of kid`s channels which give this contents. this exemplifies that tv has a pivotal role in children behavior and knowledge.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that we cannot neglect the importance of the tv in people daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01843933184 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2661863568 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153417514318 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560873201753 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392477818164 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851672326289 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311991058485 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.