Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, it has made us more knowledgeable. Discuss both opinions.
In this tech-savvy era, people are using many advanced technical thing in all areas. Some people claim that technology made people lazier while proponents argue that people improving their knowledge by the advance technology. I believe that, people are developing by the advance technology and improving themselves in all aspects by their own. The reasons are development in communication and labor work is reduced with machinery.
Firstly, by the advance technology internet, people are able to contact other which are at far places. People are able to learn a lot of information about the world and outside the world. According the research conducted by Stanford University, many people who are live in developed countries to studies and business connect to the home town very easily by the internet 98% of information is passing through internet.
Secondly, these days as people are changing their life style as the technology is changing. Education system is also changed the teaching methodology into digital class and 3-d class for better visualization to students. According to the survey, more than 80% of schools are changed their education system in digital classrooms, where student can get more information by watching than listening.
In conclusion, although people are becoming lazier with digital technology, there are many benefits with advancements in technology. To this generation and competitive world, people digital technology is very useful for fast growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51528384279 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85514058644 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5448218461 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168409419829 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612996259089 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658353410856 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098336520383 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410279594511 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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