Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, others claim it has made us more knowledgeable.
Discuss both opinions, use YOUR OWN EXPERIENCE to support.
recently, the phenomenon of utilizing modern technolody in our lives and its corresponding impacts on our awareness or diminishing our activities has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why modern technology has various advantages. These benefits are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these merits. Firstly, these features update our information about everything. For instance, inhabitants inform the latest news by the Internet. Furthermore, settlers have easy access to find and explore their popular subjects. Hence, the modern technological features lead to enhance our knowledge. Moreover, they provide a number of facilities to develop and boost educational systems. Therefore, pupils or even adults are able to instruct their lessons easier than past.
On the other hand, there is no doubt, the idea of using technology in our life has some opponents. These citizens asserted that this phenomenon alter our lifestyle and decline a number of activities. According to recent research undertaken by a prestigious university, dwellers do not have the tendency to walk or cycling in order to do some tasks and they much prefer doing online. Namely, they purchase their needs online or book the libraries, hotels and universities in this way. Thus, laziness has increased among the populations.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of using modern technology are far more outweigh their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
recently, the phenomenon of utilizing modern tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48630136986 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01827951972 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5684910877 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660035319141 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175270728873 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290124553466 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446814645646 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190393123647 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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