Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, others claim it has made us more knowledgeable. Discuss both opinions and example
The importance of digital world has made some people lazy, and some intelligent, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of different sceintific inventions and electrical gadgets has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of digital trend in recent years.Itcan be agreed that computers or can say new technology of machines has made the people lifes and their talent more productive. this essay will elaborate both postive and negative impacts and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons to support how today's digital or elctronic world made everyone's life more easy and useful, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that emails, phones and messages helping many families to say connected to their loved ones through this digital world of smart devices. For instance, organizations can easily store their data on computers in small folders, this is saving them from space of hard copy documents which was used in earlire time to store company records. Therefore, this technological advancement has made the life more productive not lazy.
Nevertheeless, there remain some draw backs, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of digital things like smart phones, games and websites information over the young generation, but the most alarming one stems from the fact that most of the companies relying on different software and computers for their operations has emreged the issue of unemployement.
According to above facts, it can be concluded that the imapct of Modern age is prominent , although it has number of drawbacks which should be well handled by educating people more of the technology adavancemts that can help to incraese the employment rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3665480427 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82075203093 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.534258002 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.5 104.977214359 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.9669160288 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159882738899 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782500161623 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602127320866 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919062276117 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571321016077 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 12.6369458128 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.0 Out of 90
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