Zoos are help or danger for animals.
Zoos helping or hurting animals has always been a topic of debate, which has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of zoos has changed the natural habitat of all the animals kept in capture has sparked the controversy over the potential influence of animals rights in recent years. it can be agreed that zoos are misused in the name of protecting the scarce species, instead used for human entertainment or experiments. this essay will elaborate both positive and negative impacts of animals rights and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons, but the most alraming one is lack of negligence behavior towards the animals in the zoo. For instance, tigers and elephants specifically been tortured to perform the stunts for entertaining people in China to earn money. which is very illegal and abuse on those animals. They are used for experiments to check medicines and drugs. this shows that animals are not safe in zoos.
Nevertheless, some people adopt ab opposing view that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of animals safety. species those are endangered like, while tigers in Canada are kept in captivity to protect and secure their existence. which is a help for all animals in danger.
According to the above facts, it can be concluded that animals should have the freedom like humans to live and breathe without any torture. Though it has some drawbacks which should be well handled by putting some laws in place to protect all the animals from an experiment conducted for medicines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0888030888 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66576524073 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.902779885 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234019232735 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819917978404 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979286346702 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129788220754 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581298690191 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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