Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.
Nowadays, it is said that animals should be kept in restricted places, while others presume that they must live in wild. I strongly agree with those who believe that they should be free in their region and I will discuss both views in this essay.
In recent years, many animals have been hunted by humankind, and the habitat of some animals have been destroyed by climate change. some people think that keeping them in zoos can be beneficial, for example, the extinction of Pandas can be reduced by scientific supervision in specific places. furthermore, people who have no experience of seeing these beautiful animals have a chance to watch them. Lastly, watching them in zoos can be pleasant for kids who were taught about them in their books and their imagination can be improved.
Keeping any kind of beasts in captivity has many disadvantages. For instance, some mental disorders can increase among them. For example, animals which were raised in captivity have different behavior from their wild counterparts, like anxiety which came from being in one place and the result of this. furthermore, the size of the muscles could be reduced by lying down in zoos where they are fed by the animals' park authorities, because of this they can not search for food and prey or run. Moreover, they have been created to be in a free place not being in cages so the matter could be harmful to them in any kind of living.
To conclude, there are many different views on the issue discussed but I highly believe that not only are the benefits of leaving animals alone more but also they knew the way of living before the human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77385159011 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44822015301 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.825874837 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240991442793 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944269548017 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400969766023 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141578554725 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03113481218 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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